Analysis of Snowflake

Dave Dugan 1974 (Louisville, Ky)



A beautiful sheen of intricately splayed layers, with rich complexity as if seemingly certain was crafted completely purposefully, though likely,
perhaps even  clearly,  a construct of countless, unimaginable imagined forces collaborating carefully  as covert conductors.
The conduit so fragile, in its final hour, the glass sunders to its final grain of sand,
Its shelter succumbs to sound silence and secedes into this souls sarcophagus until it, as well, shatters.
As it was, it still shall be,
But with certain discord, so perfectly.
Its history now eternally absent,
as the broken sheen shares no reflection.
Neither recycled nor forgotten,  just undone.


Scheme ABCBAADEE
Poetic Form
Metre 010011100011011010011100101100101000110 01101000111001000010100100100110010 01001100110100111110111 11001111001011101000111110 1111111 1110101100 11001010010 1010111010 100101010101
Characters 679
Words 102
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 60
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 536
Words per stanza (avg) 104
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Submitted on March 09, 2021

Modified on March 30, 2023

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Dave Dugan

47 year old male, married with 2 children. Daughter and princess Evelyn is 5 and my mini-me Hayden is 6. I'm recently diagnosed with squamous cell carcinoma in the upper lobe of my right lung, it is in Stage 3A, t4n1. I'm not adding this for attention or sympathy, just to share an irony and perhaps a spiritual awakening. I wrote this poem sometime ago well before my diagnosis. At the time, it had multiple meanings to me with the underlying theme as to what is life and mortality and the fragile and complex nature associated with those themes. It also has elements of existence thru God and science. However, now with my current diagnosis, it has taken on an additional meaning to me that parallels where I am now and my thoughts. I felt this made it interesting enough to share. I've no expectations regarding this poem other than to share it as it has so many meanings to me. Perhaps it will for some readers as well. more…

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