Analysis of Oasis



Cuello blanco,⁣
cabellera oscura,⁣
lunares que adornan
su cara de luna,⁣
sonrisa macabra,⁣
nariz puntiaguda,⁣
labios como gajos,⁣
dientes que torturan.⁣

Ojos de felina,⁣
mirada profunda,⁣
sus pechos, panales,⁣
que manan dulzura,⁣
sus brazos, dos ramas⁣
que enredan mis dudas,⁣
el talle moldeable⁣
como una escultura.⁣

Su vértice húmedo⁣
por la calentura,⁣
las piernas abiertas⁣
me muestran su gruta.⁣
Yo bebo sediento⁣
de su agua pura,⁣
como un pobre diablo⁣
que, en pleno desierto,⁣
encuentra un oasis⁣
en medio de dunas.⁣


Scheme ABCCBDEC CDEBEEFB DBEDDBADEE
Poetic Form
Metre 01010 11 111 110110 11 11 1101 111 1 111 0101 111 111 11011 11110 111 10101 1 11111 111 111 1111 111 111010 101110 1111 11010 110011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 556
Words 101
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 28
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 395
Words per stanza (avg) 83
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Carmen Victoria Jiménez

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