Analysis of Equus Pallidus



The horse was pale,
paler than the light off the mountain
that reflected back in memories long abandoned

Its mane was long,
longer than the struggle to save what
fortune had vehemently denied me twice

The time was short,
shorter than the flashes of history
that hoofprints trampled in the disappearing snow

The trail was closing,
closing on one last intrepid promise
crying out for life amidst a stampede of death

(Valley Forge Stables: March, 2021)


Scheme XXX XXX XXX XXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 0111 11011010 1010101001010 1111 101010111 10110000111 0111 1010101100 1110000101 01110 1011101010 101110100111 101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 438
Words 76
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 73
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted by sage48 on March 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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