Analysis of Akelapan

Arhama Bano 2001 (Utterpradesh)



Kitni akeli hoo main
Yahan koi nhi hai puchne wala ki mera haal kaisa hai
Koi nhi puchta ki mera dard kaisa hai
Koi nhi puchta ki mere jakhm kaise hai
Aye mere rab ab tu hi bata de ki ye meri jindagi ka paher kaisa hai
Na jeene ki aash rakhti hoo
Na marne ki koshishe hai
Na udne aash hai
Na girne par niraasha hai
Ab jo bhi aye mere rab ek tera hi bharosha hai
Pata nhi kis mod pe le aayi hai zindagi
Har dagar sooni si hai
Har paraya sa hai
Na kisi ka saath hai
Aur Na hi koi baat
Pata nhi fir kyun koi mere saath nhi hai
Aye mere rab ab tu hi bata de ki ye mere kis gunahon ki saza hai
Mere har apne ke dil me mere liye koi jagah nhi hai ..


Scheme ABBBBBBBBBCBBBDBBB
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 111111011111 11111111 11111111 1111111111111111 111111 11111 1111 11111 11111111111 111110111 11111 1111 11111 11111 111111111 1111111111111111 111111111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 639
Words 143
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 498
Words per stanza (avg) 144
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