Analysis of My Poems



my poems are not tyrants

to some  
not even poems
or worse yet offensive
scandalous bullies
behemoths of some
savage oversexed mind

mental animated  
stained dick worn
dingy wall paper
printed multiples
of pussy ass
and blue eyed
Caribbean  pools

beyond hearts mastery
hullabaloo crime scenes
like night jungles
of tooth and claw
in corridors of neuron ghosts
 and livid pornographic hieroglyphs
fed by the dreaded
 excesses of testosterone
towards some ruined
blood spotted
hanky panky panties
just to remind me of you
and how it hurt just so
and how you loved me for it

whoever you are

no
no sanitized spiel
about fragrant gardens
redwoods
azure blues
the lassitude of angels
and the secret seas keep

my poems
depravities

a slave's heart 
vaulted thighs
eating a raw mouth
in a cathedral of tongues
and wrapping myself
in your nut brown hair


Scheme A BCXDBX EXXFXXX XXFXXXXXXEDXGX X GXXXXFX CA XXXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1101110 11 11010 111010 10010 01011 1011 10100 111 10110 10100 1101 011 01001 011100 00111 1110 1101 0100111 01001001 11010 10110 01110 110 101010 1101111 011111 0111111 01011 1 1101 011010 1 101 01110 001011 110 1 011 101 10011 0001011 0101 01111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 819
Words 140
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 7, 14, 1, 7, 2, 6
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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M ABOUT MY POEMS: My poems remain explorations of the subconscious erotic. They are lunar anamorphic streams of consciousness from the deep subterranean glitz of transgressive impulses we all share Bwahhaaahaaa more…

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