Analysis of One Flesh

Elizabeth Jennings 1926 (Boston) – 2001



Lying apart now, each in a separate bed,
He with a book, keeping the light on late,
She like a girl dreaming of childhood,
All men elsewhere, it is as if they wait
Some new event: the book he holds unread,
Her eyes fixed on the shadows overhead.

Tossed up like flotsam from a former passion,
How cool they lie. They hardly ever touch,
Or if they do it is like a confession
Of having little feeling, or too much.
Chastity faces them, a destination
For which their whole lives were a preparation.

Strangely apart, yet strangely close together,
Silence between them like a thread to hold
And not wind in. And time itself's a feather
Touching them gently. Do they know they're old,
These two who are my father and my mother
Whose fire from which I came, has now grown cold?


Scheme ABXBAA CDCDCC EFEFEF
Poetic Form
Metre 10011100101 1101100111 11011011 111111111 1101011101 011101101 11110101010 1111110101 11111110010 1101010111 1001010010 1111100010 10011101010 1001110111 0110011010 1011011111 11111100110 11011111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 758
Words 145
Sentences 7
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 201
Words per stanza (avg) 48
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Submitted on August 03, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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