Analysis of Untitled



“…and her red hair lit the wall.”

Traveling by foot
 Through dimly lit alleyways
Past dumpsters filled with yesterday's refuse,
Rats scurrying about searching for sustenance,
Survival in a life of limited means.

The cabby honked twice
While the young teen in shabby dress
 Looked warily for a place,
Any place, to hide from the unknown fears of forgottenness.

Slowly the sun rose
 Bringing a glimmer of promise
 To the dank dusty darkness.

The girl looked at the sun
 And stood ever so softly,
The sun illuminating her fine featured face.
The glow of the sun's rays penetrating her softly fluffing hair in the gentle breeze,

And her red hair lit the wall.
Douglas Noel


Scheme A xbxxx xxcb xdd xxcx Ax
Poetic Form
Metre 0011101 10011 110110 110111001 110001101100 01000111001 01011 10110101 1100101 101111001111 10011 10010110 1011010 011101 0110110 01010001101 0110111000101100101 0011101 1001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 666
Words 116
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 5, 4, 3, 4, 2
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted by dougnoel on July 27, 2020

Modified on April 10, 2023

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Douglas Noel

Douglas is a published poet who have been accorded several awards for his poetry. He is a former teacher of 40 years the last 13 of which focused on teaching middle school children to write especially using various poetic forms. more…

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