Analysis of Old age



Intimate grooves on old face
Diffused hair, trebling lips
Not know what he had thoughts? 
No one may be he had
If has then not he had too
Was society here and there? 
Sitting like as opened eyes
But looks like deceased eyes
Then he feels submissive now.


Scheme ABCDEFGGH
Poetic Form Nonet (22%)
Metre 1001111 01111 111111 111111 1111111 10100101 1011101 111011 1110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 254
Words 52
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 200
Words per stanza (avg) 48
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Submitted by on February 02, 2020

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Mazloom Gill

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