Analysis of Golden Retrievals

Mark Doty 1953 (Maryville)



Fetch? Balls and sticks capture my attention
seconds at a time. Catch? I don’t think so.
Bunny, tumbling leaf, a squirrel who’s—oh
joy—actually scared. Sniff the wind, then

I’m off again: muck, pond, ditch, residue
of any thrillingly dead thing. And you?
Either you’re sunk in the past, half our walk,
thinking of what you never can bring back,

or else you’re off in some fog concerning
—tomorrow, is that what you call it? My work:
to unsnare time’s warp (and woof!), retrieving,
my haze-headed friend, you. This shining bark,

a Zen master’s bronzy gong, calls you here,
entirely, now: bow-wow, bow-wow, bow-wow.


Scheme XAAX BBXX CXCX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 1101101010 1010111111 10100101011 110011011 110111110 11011101 10110011101 1011110111 1111011010 0111111111 111101010 1110111101 011011111 01001111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 620
Words 104
Sentences 11
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 116
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Modified on April 27, 2023

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Mark Doty

Mark Doty (born August 10, 1953) is an American poet and memoirist best known for his work My Alexandria. He was the winner of the National Book Award for Poetry in 2008. more…

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