Analysis of Two Tears Among Us



fried bacon..
leave the pan hot,
cookies on side
thought of Spanish rice
help you think twice
one is the free shown forth to bleed
the other is a mighty flame
whom I am to explain
walk closer to me
lying beneath Autumn leaves

the other is like a midget far from their home
connect to the bone
lay beneath the perfume scent
both will meet in the middle
far to much to dribble

like a swap witch battered amidst the glue
borrowed basement pew
lay a hold the furnishing to disappear
dig deeper then ever before
hence the opened door
one is the wizard in the land of Oz
the other is a frog that turns into a prince
yet through the slight of hand
take note to where it all began
the Sunet Boulevard in shambles appear

tears will fold in its decorated mast
wipe the debris from your shoulder
in lasting fate make no mistake
both will meet together
pollished by the weather
light as a feather


Scheme XXXAAXXXXX XXXBB CCDEEXXXXD XFXFFF
Poetic Form
Metre 110 1011 1011 11101 1111 11011111 01010101 111101 11011 1001101 010110101111 01101 1010011 1110010 111110 1011100101 1101 1010100101 11011001 10101 1101000111 010101110101 110111 11111101 011001001 111011001 10011110 01011101 111010 11010 11010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 854
Words 170
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 10, 5, 10, 6
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 178
Words per stanza (avg) 43
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Submitted by hitalot on October 06, 2018

Modified on April 03, 2023

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Mario William Vitale

Mario William Vitale is a twentieth century poet. He has developed a style of free verse. Has written over one thousand poems. more…

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