Analysis of Yes



Waiting for the final ticket out,
  I would write that ending word

And bid goodbye to all I’d said
  both ignored—and often heard

I asked the conductor about the fare,
  he said “How much can you pay”

As I held my pen, three letters  
  came together—so arranged

A moment lingered, a lifetime flashed,
  the past and future caught

And with voucher punched I climbed aboard
  stamped YES—salvation bought

(Villanova Pennsylvania: September, 2018)


Scheme XA XA XX XX XB XB X
Poetic Form
Metre 101010101 1111101 0111111 1010101 1100100101 1111111 11111110 1010101 01010011 010101 011011101 110101 010010010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 445
Words 72
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 49
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on September 08, 2018

Modified on March 11, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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