Analysis of Leaving This World



I’ve looked and watched
  you turn away

Seeing things
  you’ve long denied

I grabbed the lion
  by his mane

Staring through
  the devil’s eye

I bought
  a one-way ticket

While never
  looking back

I’ve sailed and searched
  the roughest seas

My rigging
  often slack

I gave away
  all that I had

And asked for
  nothing more

I played the game
  and damned the rules

Rejecting
  any score

I stole my fate back
  from the wind

Which blew
  from side to side

And asking once
  my only wish...

—to leave this world alive

(Villanova Pennsylvania: July, 2018)


Scheme XA XB XX CD XX XE XX FE AX GG XX FG EX CB XX X D
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 1101 101 1101 11010 111 101 0101 11 01110 110 101 1101 0101 110 101 1101 1111 011 101 1101 0101 010 101 11111 101 11 1111 0101 1101 111101 0100101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 537
Words 96
Sentences 2
Stanzas 17
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 24
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on July 18, 2018

Modified on April 21, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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