Analysis of Hard On



beautiful beyond description in light of illumination
falling head long into a stream with whisper that evoke a taste
my very soul permeates the lavish cadence of a thought
gone our the days I used to frolic in a haze
a challenge to be free is a question of time
each of us should know how to handle their vessel
we treasure our private parts with humble adoration
a soul vex torn illustration

we seek solace as in a song
join hands in the mix can't we all just get along
like the stream we have created idols for our own pleasure
what gets you hard minus the pleasure of the weather
for I'm as light as a feather as in the sandy shore
while your our kicking it with a two bit whore screaming for more
yet more of what we put that book on the shelf as if were the spitting image of a Keebler elf

you maybe sporting a suit out in the business world
looking very pretty as you paint the city
you may have to call security cause you life is a mystery
you got a hard on so sound the alarm where the ladies are quite fond
dig much deeper then ever before with a willingness to explore so much more
one step at a time you will climb out of the corporate scene to a brand new swing
theres a battle for your mind you see we shall live it out in perfect harmony


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Poetic Form
Metre 100010100110010 1011010111010101 11011001010101 1100111110001 010111101011 111111110110 11010101110010 0111010 11101001 110011111101 1011101010110110 1111100101010 11111010100101 1110101101111011 111111111011100101010101 1101001100101 101010111010 11111010011110100 11011110011010111 11101100110100101111 11101111110100110111 10101111111111001100
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,248
Words 255
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 7, 7
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 46
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 335
Words per stanza (avg) 84
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Submitted by hitalot on October 08, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:16 min read
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Mario William Vitale

Mario William Vitale is a twentieth century poet. He has developed a style of free verse. Has written over one thousand poems. more…

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