Analysis of Velvet Underground



there's salt in the air by the ocean without a care
fell beneath the tears of the scale of obscurity
in the Spring the leaves felt through with cadence of illumination
one vibration permeates the fragile structure in my egg shelled mind
but I found a place unlike no other away from the honest decorum
its in the velvet underground with dungeons filled with dragons
the peril of its swift exploits resonate their without a single care
an abrupt front having kings and queens and a court jester to
perhaps I have bitten off far more then I could ever chew
built on a city of gold as time unfolds through the duration of the underground
out of the fever pitch silence there is brought about resilence

painted picture by the kings quarters in solvent resolution
down the corridor the villagers are entertained by the pious court jester with juggling
feathers are swept beneath the palace gate in a swirl of emotions.
out of the wood work came a polished fair maiden strong in her delivery
wanting to see the dragon blown up in its fullest extacy
after a quick look she was hooked drawn upon the nature of the beast
Both the king and queen had a magic wand  with a heavenly song

through the velvet underground there is praise for song in heightened fancy
the dragon was soon defeated by a noble man with a sword
cutting off its head he fell head long dead
this is the place where dreams are made a way of escape
from the hustle and bustle of our everyday existence learn to shun the resistance
out of every circumstance you can take part in the dance as you explore the Velvet Underground.


Scheme ABCXXDAEEFD CXDBDXX BXXXXF
Poetic Form
Metre 1100110100101 1010110110100 001011111010010 1010100101001111 1110101110011010010 10010101101110 0101111101010101 101110101001101 011110111111101 11010111101101101010 11010110111011 101010110010010 10100010010110101101100 10110101010011010 1101110101101000100 10110101101101 10011111101010101 1010110101101001 1010101111101010 0101101010101101 1011111111 1101111101101 10100101101010101110010 11100101111001110101010
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,568
Words 291
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 11, 7, 6
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 54
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 432
Words per stanza (avg) 97
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Submitted by hitalot on October 06, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:27 min read
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Mario William Vitale

Mario William Vitale is a twentieth century poet. He has developed a style of free verse. Has written over one thousand poems. more…

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