Analysis of Will You Open ?



All these years later
I still dream of you
A day in the park
Late spring
Under that tree
Hiding from the sun
Half asleep
You
Tracing secrets
In the palm of my hand
Whispering a love's tradition
Of desire
In my ear

we may never pass this way again
through the duration of love permeates the very fabric of my existence
in solitude hearts melt back the fervor of resistance
join with others to humbly frolic in this love
You
holding hands together
kisses of sweet molten lava love escalates through my hearts door
will you open ?


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Poetic Form
Metre 11110 11111 01001 11 1011 10101 101 1 1010 001111 10001010 1010 011 111011101 1011011100101011010 0101110101010 111011010011 1 101010 101110101101111 1110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 513
Words 99
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 13, 8
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 215
Words per stanza (avg) 50
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Submitted by hitalot on September 19, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mario William Vitale

Mario William Vitale is a twentieth century poet. He has developed a style of free verse. Has written over one thousand poems. more…

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