Analysis of The Illusion



I was once out in the desert with a friend
 A sandy place with whom one can depend
 One lone green cactus in the center
 We have been walking for miles
 Looking for a rich source of water
 We both often would falter
 The sun beat down on my baseball cap
 It was then I thought I seen a source to tap
 An incredible pool of fresh water
 But my mind played tricks on me
 For it was all an illusion
 The hill of sand seared my face
 I was then blinded for a moment
 Then at last we made it through a pass
 This then lead to a road and there it stood
 The Heavy Hitters Saloon
 Me & my buddy were so very happy
 For we finally made it to civilization
 Which wanted me to take a break on a long awaited vacation
 I was down to my last thin dime
 Had to do dishes to pay for our dinners
 Managed to make a collect call with my dime to a guy named Paul
 Who sent us on a first class ticket in a Uhaul to Buffalo
 Was this all an illusion ?
 In fact you have every right to know.


Scheme AABCBBDDBEFGHIJKEFFLMNOFO
Poetic Form
Metre 11110010101 0101111101 111100010 1111011 101011110 1110110 011111111 11111110111 1010011110 1111111 11111010 0111111 111101010 111111101 1111010111 0101001 1110011010 111001110010 11011101101010010 11111111 111101111010 1011001111110111 111101110001110 1111010 0111100111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 951
Words 202
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 744
Words per stanza (avg) 203
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Submitted by hitalot on August 21, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mario William Vitale

Mario William Vitale is a twentieth century poet. He has developed a style of free verse. Has written over one thousand poems. more…

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