Analysis of Divided



AN empty sky, a world of heather,
    Purple of foxglove, yellow of broom;
We two among them wading together,
    Shaking out honey, treading perfume.

Crowds of bees are giddy with clover,
    Crowds of grasshoppers skip at our feet,
Crowds of larks at their matins hang over,
    Thanking the Lord for a life so sweet.

Flusheth the rise with her purple favour,
    Gloweth the cleft with her golden ring,
'Twixt the two brown butterflies waver
    Lightly settle, and sleepily swing.

We two walk till the purple dieth
    And short dry grass under foot is brown
But one little streak at a distance lieth
    Green like a ribbon to prank the down.

Over the grass we stepped unto it,
    And God He knoweth how blithe we were!
Never a voice to bid us eschew it:
    Hey the green ribbon that showed so fair!

Hey the green ribbon! we kneeled beside it,
    We parted the grasses dewy and sheen;
Drop over drop there filtered and slided
    A tiny bright beck that trickled between.

Tinkle, tinkle, sweetly it sung to us,
    Light was our talk as of faëry bells—
Faëry wedding-bells faintly rung to us
    Down in their fortunate parallels.

Hand in hand, while the sun peered over,
    We lapped the grass on that youngling spring
Swept back its rushes, smoothed its clover,
    And said, 'Let us follow it westering.'

A dappled sky, a world of meadows,
    Circling above us the black rooks fly
Forward, backward; lo, their dark shadows
    Flit on the blossoming tapestry—

Flit on the beck, for her long grass parteth
    As hair from a maid's bright eyes blown back;
And, lo, the sun like a lover darteth
    His flattering smile on her wayward track.

Sing on! we sing in the glorious weather
    Till one steps over the tiny strand,
So narrow, in sooth, that still together
    On either brink we go hand in hand.

The beck grows wider, the hands must sever.
    On either margin, our songs all done,
We move apart, while she singeth ever,
    Taking the course of the stooping sun.

He prays, 'Come over'—I may not follow;
    I cry, 'Return'—but he cannot come:
We speak, we laugh, but with voices hollow;
    Our hands are hanging, our hearts are numb.

A breathing sigh, a sigh for answer,
    A little talking of outward things:
The careless beck is a merry dancer,
    Keeping sweet time to the air she sings.

A little pain when the beck grows wider;
    'Cross to me now—for her wavelets swell:'
'I may not cross'—and the voice beside her
    Faintly reacheth, though heeded well.

No backward path; ah! no returning;
    No second crossing that ripple's flow:
'Come to me now, for the west is burning;
    Come ere it darkens;'—'All, no! ah, no!'

Then cries of pain, and arms outreaching—
    The beck grows wider and swift and deep:
Passionate words as of one beseeching—
    The loud beck drowns them; we walk, and
            weep.

A yellow moon in splendour drooping,
    A tired queen with her state oppressed,
Low by rushes and swordgrass stooping,
    Lies she soft on the waves at rest.

The desert heavens have felt her sadness;
    Her earth will weep her some dewy tears;
The wild beck ends her tune of gladness,
    And goeth stilly as soul that fears.

We two walk on in our grassy places
    On either marge of the moonlit flood,
With the moon's own sadness in our faces,
    Where joy is withered, blossom and bud.

A shady freshness, chafers whirring,
    A little piping of leaf-hid birds;
A flutter of wings, a fitful stirring,
    A cloud to the eastward snowy as curds.

Bare grassy slopes, where kids are tethered
    Round valleys like nests all ferny-lined;
Round hills, with fluttering tree-tops feathered,
    Swell high in their freckled robes behind.

A rose-flush tender, a thrill, a quiver,
    When golden gleams to the tree-tops glide;
A flashing edge for the milk-white river,
    The beck, a river—with still sleek tide.

Broad and white, and polished as silver,
    On she goes under fruit-laden trees;
Sunk in leafage cooeth the culver.
    And 'plaineth of love's disloyalties.

Glitters the dew and shines the river,
    Up comes the lily and dries her bell;
But two are walking apart for ever,
    And wave their hands for a mute farewell.

A braver swell, a swifter sliding;
    The river hasteth, her banks recede:
Wing-like sails on her bosom gliding
    Bear down the lily and drown the reed.

Stately prows are rising and bowing
    (Shouts of mariners winnow the air),
And level sands for banks endowing
    The tiny green ribbon that showed so fair.

While, O my heart! as white sails shiver,
    And crowds are passing, and banks stretch wide,
How hard to follow, with lips that quiver,
    That moving speck on the far-off side!

Farther, farther—I see it—know it—
    My eyes brim over, it melts away:
Only my heart to my heart shall show it
    As I walk desolate day by day.

And yet I know past all doubting, truly—
    A knowledge greater than grief can dim—
I know, as he loved, he will love me duly—
    Yea, better—e'en better than I love him

And as I walk by the vast calm river,
    The awful river so dread to see,
I say, 'Thy breadth and thy depth for ever
    Are bridged by his thoughts that cross to me.'


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (21%)
Metre 110101110 10111011 1101110010 101101001 111110110 111011101 111111110 100110111 10110101 10110101 10111010 101001001 11110101 011110111 1110110101 110101101 100111101 01111110 1001111011 101101111 1011011011 1100101001 110111001 0101111001 1010101111 1110111111 1110110111 10110010 101101110 11011111 111101110 01111011 0110111 1000110111 10101111 110100100 110110111 111011111 010110101 1100110101 11110010010 111100101 1100111010 110111101 0111001110 1101010111 110111110 100110101 111111110 11111101 1111111010 10111010111 010101110 010101101 0101101010 101110111 0101101110 11111011 1111001010 1011101 110111010 11010111 1111101110 11111111 1111011 011100101 1001111010 01111110 1 01010110 010110101 11100110 11110111 0101011010 011101101 01110111 0111111 11110101010 11011011 10111001010 111101001 01010110 010101111 0101101010 0110101011 110111110 11011111 1111001110 110110101 0111001010 110110111 0101101110 010101111 101010110 111101101 1011010 01111 100101010 110100101 1111001110 01111011 010101010 01010101 111101010 110100101 101110010 11100101 010111010 0101101111 111111110 011100111 1111011110 110110111 101011111 111101101 1011111111 111100111 0111111010 010101111 11111111110 11011101111 0111101110 010101111 1111011110 111111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 5,090
Words 897
Sentences 38
Stanzas 31
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 125
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Submitted by Madeleine Quinn on May 19, 2016

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Jean Ingelow

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