Analysis of Tarnished rings
TARNISHED RINGS :
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Tarnished Rings when wedding vows of love are spoken, a vow that’s made so long ago. Behind the door of peaceful serenity,with smiles serene, an understanding prenuptial pact. A vow so Devine, to cherish, have and hold. A gifted bestowed on two in the caverns within the heart, the place of sacred Serenity. So fortified a love so pure.That's yours and mine, I never thought, when things go wrong ,this love would mean, you turn to me. Not for support, but blaringly delivering, A blow that stings. We need a place to hide!! Let’s hold our hands to hide the tarnished rings. Let’s storm out fast and find that place.Feeling to small our words repeat, we did not try!! Our spirit’s low, our hearts are weak. The vow we made, a vow to keep, for this we mourn! Let courage speak. We know why, that path we made.We need to leave, we need to go!! I hear him sigh, our love remains another chance.Yes, the caverns within the heart, the place of sacred Serenity. So fortified a love so pure, that’s yours and mine.These words make sense, to have this love we must return to The place of Serenity!!
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 101 1 101110111110011111010101110110110100101011011101010100111001001010111001001100111101110111111111111111011101000111110111111011101011111011111101011111101011011101110111111111011111111111111111111010101010100101011100100110011111011111111110110110100 1 |
Characters | 1,171 |
Words | 209 |
Sentences | 21 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 4 |
Lines Amount | 4 |
Letters per line (avg) | 226 |
Words per line (avg) | 51 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 903 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 204 |
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