Analysis of Mere Light



Short struggle
Fading with failure
Results in a long run pain
Ruptured heart
Why won’t it fade out?
Keeps on burning ablaze
Over and over again
Fallen life running from its image
Being long and deserted
Intense hopelessness
Touches inside myself
Why?
Heat’s burning.

Today once again
Fighting with the past
I’m waiting a mere light
Swallowing drug dark as night
I’m unconscious in the crowd.
I don’t know, I won’t understand
Deep is the cut
I’ll say nothing, talk nothing.
My nights, insomniac
I don’t know, I won’t understand
Hollow are the peaks

Today once again
I, being so silent
Hearing a speechless speech
In walking sun
I, waiting death
As I’m cutting my veins.


Scheme xxxxxxaxxxxxb AxccxDxbxDx Axxxxx
Poetic Form Etheree  (50%)
Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 110 10110 0100111 101 11111 111001 1001001 101101110 1010010 01100 10011 1 110 01101 10101 110011 1001111 110001 1111101 1101 1110110 11010 1111101 10101 01101 110110 100101 0101 1101 111011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 659
Words 116
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 13, 11, 6
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 177
Words per stanza (avg) 39
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Submitted by Azalea Spirit on October 04, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Abinash Parajuli

Abinash Parajuli is a Nepali poet, novelist, music critic and a journalist. Currently, he's acting a CEO/Executive Editor at MuzBuzz Monthly Magazine. more…

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