Analysis of You Stop To Point At The Moon In The Sky

Taigu Ryokan 1758 – 1831



You stop to point at the moon in the sky,
but the finger's blind unless the moon is shining.

One moon, one careless finger pointing --
are these two things or one?

The question is a pointer guiding
a novice from ignorance thick as fog.

Look deeper. The mystery calls and calls:
No moon, no finger -- nothing there at all.


Scheme XA AX AX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101001 10110101110 111101010 111111 010101010 0101100111 1100100101 1111010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 322
Words 63
Sentences 6
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Taigu Ryokan

Taigu Ryokan was born in the Echigo (now Nigata) Province of northern Japan in 1785. The son of the village headman -- a successful merchant and haiku poet of some note -- Ryokan was schooled in Japanese and Chinese literature as well as religion and calligraphy. When he was eighteen years old Ryokan met the Zen Master Kokusen and accompanied him to the Entsu-Ji temple in Tamashima where he became a Buddhist monk. Ryokan excelled at his monastic studies and was offered the position of head of the monastery when Kokusen died. But he rejected both the position and the title of Master, electing to instead wander the countryside of Japan, begging and writing poetry. He eventually moved into a hermitage (called Gogo-an or 'Five Measures of Rice') at the foot of Mt. Kugami where he lived for the remainder of his life.  more…

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