Analysis of Sunset on School Self



Don't you see?
you and me
are free?
to do as we please

No uniforms or people to appease
Now we know our A, B, C's
We're off to university
or not

Look into the sunset
and tell me what you see
was it fun? was it rad
or are you glad to pack your bags?

Never coming back
School is over
Never coming back
School is over

oh no we gotta go now
no place to call home now
oh no

Look into the sunset
and tell me what you see
Red sky at night
or cloud cover blocking your sight

Either way you go
I know you're going to have to fight
just fight it fair and fight it right
an epic battle into the night

Never coming back
school is over
Never coming back
school is over

oh no we gotta go now
no place to call home now
oh no

Look into the sunset
and tell me what you see
your lip quivers
and your shoulder shivers

I know that you don't want to face tonight
but its okay and its alright
he'll be with you until you die


Scheme aaab bbax CAxx DEDE FFG CAhh ghhh DEDE FFG CAax hhx
Poetic Form
Metre 111 101 11 11111 110110101 11110011 1110100 11 10101 011111 111111 11111111 10101 1110 10101 1110 1111011 111111 11 10101 011111 1111 11101011 10111 111101111 11110111 110100101 10101 1110 10101 1110 1111011 111111 11 10101 011111 111 011010 1111111101 111011 11110111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 887
Words 195
Sentences 5
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 3, 4, 4, 4, 3, 4, 3
Lines Amount 41
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 63
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 02, 2023

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