Analysis of Old Fighting-Men

Rudyard Kipling 1865 (Mumbai) – 1936 (London)



All the world over, nursing their scars,
Sit the old fighting-men broke in the wars--
Sit the old fighting-men, surly and grim
Mocking the lilt of the conquerors' hymn.

Dust of the battle o'erwhelmed them and hid.
Fame never found them for aught that they did.
Wounded and spent to the lazar they drew,
Lining the road where the Legions roll through.

Sons of the Laurel who press to your meed,
(Worthy God's pity most--you who succeed!)
Ere you go triumphing, crowned, to the stars,
Pity poor fighting-men, broke in the wars!


Scheme ABCC DDEE DXAB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 101101011 1011011001 1011011001 1001101001 110101101 1101111111 1001101011 1001101011 1101011111 1011011101 11111101 1011011001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 522
Words 95
Sentences 7
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 136
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 28, 2023

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Rudyard Kipling

Joseph Rudyard Kipling was an English short-story writer, poet, and novelist chiefly remembered for his tales and poems of British soldiers in India and his tales for children. more…

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