Analysis of Mid-Forest Fear

Roderic Quinn 1867 (Surry Hills, New South Wales) – 1949 (Darlinghurst, New South Wales)




SHE is standing at the gate,   
 Tall and sweet,   
And although the hour be late   
 She will greet   
   Me, her lover,           
   Smiling over   
Absent mind and tardy feet.   

‘Rest,’ I’ll say to her, ‘and more rest,’   
 As she wraps her love around me,   
And I’ll tell her of the forest,           
Of the strange, fear-haunted forest   
 Where the fleshless beings found me.   

For I trod a rock-strewn rude way   
 Thinking only of my lover,   
When the moonlight on the woodway,           
Made a weird-way of the woodway,   
 And a place where demons hover.   

For the leaves that had been sleeping   
 On the sodden soil-bed lying,   
Look a motion and ’gan creeping,           
Like a thousand small feet creeping,   
 And there rose a distant sighing.   

Why the trees did droop their tresses,   
 Weeping leaves for something under,   
And what bode in dim recesses,           
Feline-lurked in dim recesses,   
 Paled my cheeks and heart to ponder.   

Had I feet I would have hurried,   
 But the moonlit forest chained me,   
Soul and body grasped and worried,           
With frost-fingers gripped and worried,   
 Till, half-stayed, my hurt heart pained me.…   

‘Rest,’ I’ll say, ‘my Love, and more rest;   
 Things unseen have life and motion   
And they haunt the moonlit forest—           
Soul-affronting haunt the forest,   
 And men meet them on the ocean.’   

She will look so grave and kind,   
 Saying ‘Rest—   
Rest is here for heart and mind           
 On this breast—   
   Put aside all   
   Fancies idle,   
I will shield you—Love is best.’


Scheme ABABCCB DEFFE GCGGC HHHHH XCIIC JEJJE DKFFK LDLDXXD
Poetic Form
Metre 1110101 101 0101011 111 1010 1010 1010101 11110011 11101011 01101010 10111010 1011011 11101111 10101110 101101 1011101 00111010 10111110 10101110 10100110 10101110 01101010 10111110 10111010 01101100 1101100 11101110 11111110 1011011 10101010 11101010 11111111 11111011 10111010 0110110 10101010 01111010 1111101 101 1111101 111 1011 1010 1111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,596
Words 250
Sentences 9
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 7, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 7
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 131
Words per stanza (avg) 30
Font size:
 

Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:15 min read
98

Roderic Quinn

Roderic Joseph Quinn was an Australian poet. more…

All Roderic Quinn poems | Roderic Quinn Books

1 fan

Discuss this Roderic Quinn poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Mid-Forest Fear" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 25 Jun 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/32935/mid-forest-fear>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    June 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    5
    days
    17
    hours
    43
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Who wrote the poem "Stopping by Woods On a Snowy Evening"?
    A William Shakespeare
    B Elizabeth Barrett Browning
    C John Keats
    D Robert Frost