Analysis of My Picture
Robert William Service 1874 – 1958
I made a picture; all my heart
I put in it, and all I knew
Of canvas-cunning and of Art,
Of tenderness and passion true.
A worshipped Master came to see;
Oh he was kind and gentle, too.
He studied it with sympathy,
And sensed what I had sought to do.
Said he: "Your paint is fresh and fair,
And I can praise it without cease;
And yet a touch just here and there
Would make of it a masterpiece."
He took the brush from out my hand;
He touched it here, he touched it there.
So well he seemed to understand,
And momently it grew more fair.
Oh there was nothing I could say,
And there was nothing I could do.
I thanked him, and he went his way,
And then - I slashed my picture through.
For though his brush with soft caress
Had made my daub a thing divine,
Oh God! I wept with bitterness,
. . . It wasn't mine, it wasn't mine.
Scheme | ABABCBCB DEDEFDFD GBGBXHXH |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11010111 11010111 11010011 11000101 01010111 11110101 11011100 01111111 11111101 01111011 01011101 1111010 11011111 11111111 1111101 011111 11110111 01110111 11101111 01111101 11111101 11110101 11111100 11011101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 807 |
Words | 167 |
Sentences | 14 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 8, 8, 8 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 26 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 206 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 56 |
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Submitted on May 13, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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