Analysis of Lucindy Jane

Robert William Service 1874 – 1958



When I was young I was too proud
        To wheel my daughter in her pram.
"It's infra dig," I said aloud,--
        Bot now I'm old, behold I am
Perambulating up and down
        Grand-daughter through the town.

And when I come into the Square,
        Beside the fountain I will stop;
And as to rest I linger there,
        The dames will say: "How do, Grand-pop!
Lucindy Jane with eyes so blue
        Looks more and more like you."

And sure it's pleased as Punch I get,
        And take Lucindy on my knee;
Aye, at the risk of getting wet,
        I blether to the girls a wee:
Then as we have a bottle date
        Home we perambulate.

Gosh! That's the joy of all my day;
        And as I play the part of nurse:
"She's got your nose," I hear them say.
        Thinks I: "Well now, she might have worse."
And how I dream I'll live to see
        A great-grandchild upon my knee,
        Whom folks say looks like me!


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Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 11110001 11011101 11110111 1101 110101 01110101 01010111 01111101 01111111 111111 110111 01111111 011111 11011101 1110101 11110101 111 11011111 01110111 11111111 11111111 01111111 0110111 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 922
Words 171
Sentences 10
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 7
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 152
Words per stanza (avg) 41
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Robert William Service

Robert William Service was a poet and writer sometimes referred to as the Bard of the Yukon He is best-known for his writings on the Canadian North including the poems The Shooting of Dan McGrew The Law of the Yukon and The Cremation of Sam McGee His writing was so expressive that his readers took him for a hard-bitten old Klondike prospector not the later-arriving bank clerk he actually was Robert William Service was born 16 January 1874 in Preston England but also lived in Scotland before emigrating to Canada in 1894 Service went to the Yukon Territory in 1904 as a bank clerk and became famous for his poems about this region which are mostly in his first two books of poetry He wrote quite a bit of prose as well and worked as a reporter for some time but those writings are not nearly as well known as his poems He travelled around the world quite a bit and narrowly escaped from France at the beginning of the Second World War during which time he lived in Hollywood California He died 11 September 1958 in France Incidentally he played himself in a movie called The Spoilers starring John Wayne and Marlene Dietrich more…

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