Analysis of The Phantom Kiss

Paul Laurence Dunbar 1872 (Dayton) – 1906



One night in my room, still and beamless,
With will and with thought in eclipse,
I rested in sleep that was dreamless;
When softly there fell on my lips

A touch, as of lips that were pressing
Mine own with the message of bliss--
A sudden, soft, fleeting caressing,
A breath like a maiden's first kiss.

I woke-and the scoffer may doubt me--
I peered in surprise through the gloom;
But nothing and none were about me,
And I was alone in my room.

Perhaps 't was the wind that caressed me
And touched me with dew-laden breath;
Or, maybe, close-sweeping, there passed me
The low-winging Angel of Death.

Some sceptic may choose to disdain it,
Or one feign to read it aright;
Or wisdom may seek to explain it--
This mystical kiss in the night.

But rather let fancy thus clear it:
That, thinking of me here alone,
The miles were made naught, and, in spirit,
Thy lips, love, were laid on mine own.


Scheme AAAA BABA CDCD CECE FFFX FGXG
Poetic Form Quatrain  (83%)
Metre 11011101 11011001 11001111 11011111 011111010 11101011 010110010 0110111 11001111 11001101 110010011 01101011 0111011011 01111101 110110111 01101011 11111011 1111111 110111011 11001001 110110111 11011101 010110010 11101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 873
Words 167
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 114
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 16, 2023

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Paul Laurence Dunbar

Paul Laurence Dunbar was a seminal American poet of the late 19th and early 20th centuries Dunbar gained national recognition for his 1896 Lyrics of a Lowly Life one poem in the collection being Ode to Ethiopia more…

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