Analysis of Phyllis



PHYLLIS, ah, Phyllis, my life is a gray day,
Few are my years, but my griefs are not few,
Ever to youth should each day be a May-day,
Warm wind and rose-breath and diamonded dew—
Phyllis, ah, Phyllis, my life is a gray day.
Oh for the sunlight that shines on a May-day!
Only the cloud hangeth over my life.
Love that should bring me youth's happiest heyday
Brings me but seasons of sorrow and strife:
Phyllis, ah, Phyllis, my life is a gray day.

Sunshine or shadow, or gold day or gray day,
Life must be lived as our destinies rule;
Leisure or labor or work day or play day—
Feasts for the famous and fun for the fool;
Phyllis, ah, Phyllis, my life is a gray day.


Scheme AbabAacacA adadA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 10110111011 1111111111 10111111011 11011011 10110111011 1101111011 100111011 1111111001 1111011001 10110111011 111111111 11111101001 10110111111 1101001101 10110111011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 661
Words 131
Sentences 6
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 10, 5
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 252
Words per stanza (avg) 65
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Paul Laurence Dunbar

Paul Laurence Dunbar was a seminal American poet of the late 19th and early 20th centuries Dunbar gained national recognition for his 1896 Lyrics of a Lowly Life one poem in the collection being Ode to Ethiopia more…

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