Analysis of O I saw witchcraft tonight

Mirabai 1498 (Kudki, Pali district, Jodhpur State) – 1556 (Dwaraka)



O I saw witchcraft tonight
in the region of Braj.
A milking girl going her rounds,
a pot on her head,
came face to face with the Dark One.
My friend, she is babbling,
can no longer say "buttermilk."
- Come get the Dark One, the Dark One!
A pot full of Shyam! -
In the overgrown lanes
of Vrindavan forest
the Enchanter of Hearts fixed his
eye on this girl,
then departed.
Mira's lord is hot, lovely
and raven -
tonight she saw witchcraft
at Braj.

[Translated  by Robert Bly]


Scheme XAXXBXXBXXXXXXXBXA X
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 001011 01011001 01101 11111011 1111100 1110110 11011011 01111 00011 1110 00101111 1111 1010 111110 010 01111 11 0101101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 463
Words 94
Sentences 8
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 18, 1
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 181
Words per stanza (avg) 46
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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