Analysis of Dark Friend, what can I say?

Mirabai 1498 (Kudki, Pali district, Jodhpur State) – 1556 (Dwaraka)



Dark Friend, what can I say?
This love I bring
from distant lifetimes is ancient,
do not revile it.
Seeing your elegant body
I am ravished.
Visit our courtyard, hear the women
singing old hymns
On the square I've laid
out a welcome of teardrops,
body and mind I surrendered ages ago,
taking refuge
wherever your feet pass.
Mira flees from lifetime to lifetime,
your virgin.


Scheme ABCDECFGHAIJKLM
Poetic Form Tetractys  (33%)
Metre 111111 1111 1101110 11011 10110010 111 101011010 1011 10111 101011 100110101001 1010 010111 1011111 110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 367
Words 68
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 296
Words per stanza (avg) 66
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mirabai

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