Analysis of Tanka 03

Masaoki Shiki 1867 (Matsuyama, Ehime) – 1902 (Tokyo)



The man
I used to meet in the mirror
is no more.
Now I see a wasted face.
It dribbles tears.


Scheme ABCDE
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Tanka  (40%)
Cinquain  (40%)
Lanturne  (40%)
Metre 01 11110010 111 1110101 1101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 96
Words 23
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 69
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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Masaoki Shiki

Masaoka Shiki, pen-name of Masaoka Noboru was a Japanese poet, author, and literary critic in Meiji period Japan. more…

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