Analysis of Evening Song of the Thoughtful Child

Katherine Mansfield 1888 (Wellington) – 1923 (Fontainebleau, Île-de-France)



Shadow children, thin and small,
Now the day is left behind,
You are dancing on the wall,
On the curtains, on the blind.

On the ceiling, children, too,
Peeping round the nursery door,
Let me come and play with you,
As we always played before.

Let's pretend that we have wings
And can really truly fly
Over every sort of things
Up and up into the sky.

Where the sweet star children play--
It does seem a dreadful rule,
They must stay inside all day.
I suppose they go to school.

And to-night, dears, do you see,
They are having such a race
With their father moon--the tree
Almost hides his funny face.

Shadow children, once at night,
I was all tucked up in bed,
Father moon came--such a fright--
Through the window poked his head;

I could see his staring eyes,
O, my dears, I was afraid,
That was not a nice surprise,
And the dreadful noise I made!

Let us make a fairy ring,
Shadow children, hand in hand,
And our songs quite softly sing
That we learned in fairyland.

Shadow children, hin and small,
See, the day is far behind;
And I kiss you--on the wall--
On the curtains--on the blind.


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH IJIJ KLKL MNMN OPOP ABAB
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 110101 1011101 1110101 1010101 1010101 10101001 1110111 111101 1011111 0110101 10100111 1010101 1011101 1110101 1110111 1011111 0111111 1110101 1110101 111101 110111 1111101 1011101 1010111 1111101 1111101 1110101 0010111 1110101 110101 01011101 111010 110101 1011101 0111101 1010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,060
Words 206
Sentences 10
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Katherine Mansfield

Katherine Mansfield Beauchamp Murry was a prominent modernist writer of short fiction who was born and brought up in colonial New Zealand and wrote under the pen name of Katherine Mansfield. more…

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