Analysis of To Be The Sun

L.T. 2011 (Ontario)



How I long to be the sun
That radiates its light
How I long to be the sun
That illuminates others' lives
Yet when the sun sets It weeps in solitude
Though it appears to shine It sears within
I am the sun
Burning with a facade of joy
But outwardly radiating
With solar bursts and prominences
The agony of being the sun is profound


Scheme AbAcdeafghi
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101 11011 1111101 1010101 1101111010 1101111101 1101 10100111 1100100 110101000 010011001101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 338
Words 74
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 264
Words per stanza (avg) 65
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Written on May 11, 2024

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