Analysis of I Patiently Wait



I'm Going Insane,
Depression and Pain,
Get Out of My Brain,
Today is the Day
I'm Changing My Ways,
Thing's Need to Change,
My Time Went to Waste,
I Stare into Space,
Scared and Afraid
As I Stare and I Daze,
Angel's they Wait,
To Take Me Away
As I Lay in a Grave,
I Wait and I Wait,
My Soul Wait's,
It Patiently Waits,
To Get Taken to Grace,
To a Place
Where Peace Stay's,
It Radiates,
Sound Waves
That Amaze
And Shine like Ray's,
That Vibrate
In a State
That Penetrates
In Concise Complex Ways,
It Delicately Hibernates,
In this Place,
There's No Escape,
Don't Lose Faith,
It's Our Fate
To One Day
Help God Create.


Scheme AAABCDEFGCHBIHCJFFCJKCCHHJCCFLMHBH
Poetic Form
Metre 11001 01001 11111 01101 11011 1111 11111 11011 1001 111011 111 11101 111001 11011 111 11001 111011 101 111 110 11 101 0111 110 001 110 001101 110001 011 1101 111 1101 111 1101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 615
Words 141
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 34
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 464
Words per stanza (avg) 118

About this poem

I was inspired by a Sudden Death of Someone Special to Me. It Helped Me Cope with her Death.

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Submitted by RoadRunna215 on May 10, 2024

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