Analysis of Mom

Robert Pippen 1981 (Jackson Mississippi)



If it wasn't for you my life could of never been,
Now I see you when your life is at the end,
Not only was you my mom but also my best friend,

Growing up I missed so much and wasn't there,
Mostly stayed in trouble and made life unable to bare,
My punishments were true but never unfair,

You have always done what you saw as right,
Even now your body is tired you don't give up the fight,
Now and forever I'll love you with all my might,

The family you leave behind will forever love you,
We know you will be around to see us through,
What I write is as much for us as it is for you,


Scheme XAA BBB CCC DDD
Poetic Form
Metre 1110111111101 11111111101 1101111110111 10111110101 10101001101011 11000111001 111111111 101110110111101 100101111111 01001101101011 11111011111 1111111111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 585
Words 136
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 111
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

I wrote this for my Mom and it was read at her funeral.

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Written on April 29, 2020

Submitted by rob467959 on May 10, 2024

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Robert Pippen

42 been writing poetry for 20 plus years started in prison writing what I felt. Then it was different things that happened in and around my life. more…

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