Analysis of Weren't we?

Anvesha 2008 (Indore)



We were meant to be weren't we?
I thought we were until I saw how I see you and how you saw me...
I looked at you like I was watching the eternal galaxy
While you looked at me with a frawn on your face
I saw stars in your eyes but when they met mine OH they turned so black)
I still can't get over you
I still love you the way I did in the beginning but turns out you stopped somewhere in between
You found your destination and sadly it wasn't me i walked ahead thinking you were literally behind me but when I turned back and saw my tiny foot steps....
I realised you left me all alone you stayed where you felt comfortable leaving me all alone in this mysterious world


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Poetic Form
Metre 10111101 11100111111101111 1111111100010100 11111101111 1110111111111111 1111101 1111011100010111111001 1110100101101110110101000011111110111011 111111011111110001011010101001
Characters 673
Words 142
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 58
Words per line (avg) 15
Letters per stanza (avg) 523
Words per stanza (avg) 136

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When you think it's forever but life has another plans...

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Written on April 19, 2024

Submitted by anveshajain983 on April 26, 2024

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