Analysis of Lone I cross the River Wide



Lone I Cross the River Wide
by
R L Karlowsky

Lone I cross the river wide, with duty, with Courage I must abide.

My spirits soar as my journey awakens, no less difficult then past steps taken.

Shallow pools are a welcome sight and craggy rocks give a hand hold tight.

Across the way I see journeys end, with many unknowns, I will contend.

How many times will my footfalls fail, as I traverse this water with a blinded trail.

I sink ever deeper, yet I must go on, for fear of failure is frowned upon.

The water resists every step I take, I can turn about, was this a mistake?

I pull in my fear as my body becomes light, my critics would laugh to see my fright.

Determined I press on, I won’t turn back, I push even harder, I shall not slack.

There ahead in the shallows low, the turbulent waters will ease their flow.

I reach the bank, one foot in the sand, I look back on my journey, I now understand.

Lone I crossed the river wide, with duty, with courage I did abide.


Scheme AXB A X C X X X B C B X X A
Poetic Form
Metre 1110101 1 111 11101011101101101 110111100101110011110 10110101010110111 010111101110011101 11011111111011010101 11101011111111101101 010011001111110111001 110111110011110111111 01011111111110101111 10100110100101111 11011100111111101101 11101011101101101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 983
Words 213
Sentences 12
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 3, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 50
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 57
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

The courage to go on when all seems against you.

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Written on April 12, 2024

Submitted by rlklite on April 12, 2024

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DR. R L Karlowsky

Started as poor child. I grew with many struggles to overcome. I eventually retired as an Adjunct Professor. I chose to build a life and not let it pull me down. more…

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