Analysis of Wish I was dead

Melissa L Maxwell 1988 (Camden New Jersey)



I dream about being away

I dream of another life

I dream of being someone else

Not just someone, somebody

I never really thought about what I wanted out of this life but

I wish I was dead.

I feel like an imposter

Am I real?

I don’t think so.

There is little in this world that is real

Everything around me only exists because that’s how my brain perceives it

Now I’m at the edge

I’m looking out

Looking for a third option

There isn’t one I can perceive

I wish I was dead


Scheme x x x x x A x b x b x x x x x A
Poetic Form
Metre 11011001 1110101 1111011 11110 11010101111011111 11111 11111 111 1111 1110011111 100111001011111011 11101 1101 1010110 1111101 11111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 515
Words 126
Sentences 4
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 23
Words per stanza (avg) 6

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A poem about death

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Written on April 09, 2025

Submitted by maxwellm694 on April 09, 2024

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