Analysis of That sinking feeling



I don’t know what to do.
I don’t know what to say.

I used to think I had the answer.
A joke.
A quip.
A distraction.  
A play.

I won’t
COPE -

And, the best I can give..?

Speak to people
about your mind,
no matter how “mad”
you think you might sound,
because I guarantee
that there’s a kind of people
just as sad,
just as low,
on their way,
so slowly,
sinking,
taking the call,
to the cold,
to the ground.

I have more to say,
but the heart’s beating’s slowed…

I hope that you cope.

I hope you survive.


Scheme XA XXXXA XB X CXDEFCDXAFXXXE AX B X
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 111111 111111010 01 01 0010 01 11 1 001111 1110 0111 11011 11111 01101 1101110 111 111 111 110 10 1001 101 101 11111 101101 11111 11101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 563
Words 142
Sentences 14
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 5, 2, 1, 14, 2, 1, 1
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 45
Words per stanza (avg) 13
Font size:
 

Submitted by Vencejo on May 05, 2024

42 sec read
3

Discuss this H. Lock poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "That sinking feeling" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 25 Jun 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/186558/that-sinking-feeling>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    June 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    5
    days
    8
    hours
    28
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    "Twas brillig, and the slithy toves Did gyre and gimble in the wabe."
    A Shel Silverstein
    B Lord Byron
    C Lewis Carroll
    D Dr. Seuss