Analysis of Memories?



Years ago, I lost a grandparent to it.
Today, I am losing a parent
The losses start out small, tiny pebbles of
forgetfulness

Now mountains of memory have been
claimed

In response, to a nurse's query, he does give her his address.
She does not know that it is to a house that he hasn't seen in
seventy years.

This morning when asked if he had children-he said "no:. So, I show up this afternoon... one of his four non-existent "kids'.

My dad is 93. I am 60. He knows who I am. For now.
He once was a master speaker. Now  he responds with a word or two.
We laugh a little, he smiles. He's happy and that's all that matters.

Most of everything is forgotten. Except love.
Except love.


Scheme XXAB CX BCB B XXB AA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1011101011 011110010 01011110101 1 110110011 1 001101010111011 1111111101111010 1001 11011111101111111101111110101 111111111111 11101010110110111 1101011110011110 11101010011 011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 685
Words 144
Sentences 17
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 3, 1, 3, 2
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

My 93 year old dad just passed away on 2/24/24. He had Dementia. I wrote this poem about the journey. He was a combat decorated veteran of the Korean Conflict. Despite the horrors of war, he was a kind, caring soul who always believed in me, no matter what. I was blessed to have him as my dad.

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Written on February 10, 2024

Submitted by Ceci2you on March 07, 2024

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Cecilia Marie Holland

Native Detroiter, graduate of the University of Detroit-Mercy. I am a coffee lover, cool auntie and I love family history, African-American history and genetic genealogy. more…

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