Analysis of Felt and Fairways

David Plantinga 1972 (Sherbrooke)



Though cue-balls are glossy and smooth
The felt has been rough since my youth.
Some dimples assist
When fairways resist
But putting on tables is uncouth.


Scheme ABCCB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (60%)
Cinquain  (20%)
Lanturne  (20%)
Metre 11111001 01111111 11001 1101 110110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 156
Words 29
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 125
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted by DavidPlantinga on March 30, 2024

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