Analysis of What I needed



I neededto be fair
So life had a meaning

I needed to be true
So I'd make it through

I needed to forgive
So I could continue  to live

I needed to understand
That God had a plan

I needed to know God was near
Some how I always heard him
Constantly in my ear

He's one I could count on
To always br here.

He's  the reason of my progress
Of losing all that fear.


Scheme XX AA XX XX BXC XC XB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 1111 111010 110111 11111 110101 11101011 110101 11101 11011111 111111 100011 111111 1111 1010111 110111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 367
Words 88
Sentences 2
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 2, 2
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 39
Words per stanza (avg) 11

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Seeing life in fairness

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Written on March 25, 2024

Submitted by doreenefelder192 on March 25, 2024

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Doreene Felder

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