Analysis of The living corpse
The happy hopeless homeless
My brethren
My crew
The unhappy
Morally skewed
The weak of will
Living in the street
With a condo made of a tarp
They piss, moan and harp
Pick their corner
Stand and stare
Whatever there selling
Its buyer beware
Without hope or a dream
Their souls are easy to redeem
They have given up in this fight
And wait for deaths nip and bite
They have closed their eyes
To the light
It’s a tired tale
Of how they did fail
Gave up on life
And chose to bail
Help is offered
Assistance proffered
Supported extended
And always rescinded
As if offended
By a human trying to do right
It’s a curious thing
To want to live as a deposed king
With your court being the street
And a rat for a jester
Nibbling at your feet
With your queen on her knees
Worshipping the scepter of anyone with a dollar’s worth of cheese
While your kingdom starves
Poverty carves
Another slice of your will to live
Boundless emptiness
Is all you have to give
Confused by the illusion
That things will get better
As you rest on your throne
Lonely and alone
I invite you
To kneel
Before the one true King
Open your heart
And let him in
All are welcome
To the wisdom of the feast
Turn your back upon
The unforgiving beast
That has cared for you the least
If you’re going to give up
At least give in
To the one to free you from sin
The one to keep his kin
And hold you close
And allow you to win
The prize we all crave
A righteous soul
And useful slave
Abdicate your empire
Silence the liar
In your head
Redeem yourself from the dead
And allow yourself to be led
From the insane domain
Into the realm
Of the true King at the helm
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 0101010 110 11 0010 1001 0111 10001 10101101 11101 1110 101 10110 11001 011101 11110101 11101011 0111101 11111 101 10101 11111 1111 0111 1110 01010 010010 01010 11010 101010111 101001 111110011 1111001 0011010 100111 111101 100011101010111 11101 1001 010111111 10100 111111 0110010 111110 111111 10001 1011 11 010111 1011 0110 1110 1010101 11101 000101 1111101 1110111 1110 10111111 011111 0111 001111 01111 0101 0101 101100 10010 011 0101101 00101111 100101 0101 1011101 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,634 |
Words | 326 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 19, 4, 6, 12, 4, 10, 9, 8 |
Lines Amount | 72 |
Letters per line (avg) | 18 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 162 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 40 |
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