Analysis of Cheated

Patricia Kienle 1980 (Providence, RI)



You cheated on me and now your outside my door,
Gave you my all served it to you in a bow,
Then you turned and spit it back in my face,
Its all good I've gotten over you many moons ago,
You be dialing me with ya lies,
Thinking you can come back between these thighs,
Bitch you ripped out my heart then hit suflay,
Your loss ya never having this again,
Ya never know real love if slapped you in the face,
All you wanted was to fuck someone else,
I'm not taking no more of your bullshit,
Mental games ya playing with my mind,
Pulling at my heart strings,
You have no intentions on coming home,
Using me to have someone there, why?
Cause I'm the only one who truly fucken cared,
Yet you run out the door to get another fucken score,
Lucky I'm still here to be ya friend,
No more tugging at heart strings,
The rage you gave me inside,
All I want to do rip ya fucken throat out,
Shove ya heart up ya ass make you dig it out,
Hurt you left inside me,
Never could you truly understand,
That why I'm done Bitch with petty games,
I closed that door.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,041
Words 233
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 801
Words per stanza (avg) 208

About this poem

Heartbreak and how i felt being cheated on once again in a relationship i thought was real ended up fake.

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Written on November 20, 2022

Submitted by staznake on March 12, 2024

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Patricia Kienle

I write about life experiences and how I feel to get it out and let things go. Helps me vent and get things of my chest and mind. more…

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