Analysis of Boulders Aren't Forever



Boulders Aren't Forever

Such a beautiful soul;
A treasure called home before fully collected.
Never a cross word exchanged unnecessarily.
Days pass and the feels drop in like skateboarders
Relenting only to the day to day musings;
Another heart of gold torn away from my hands

So I shall live on without
The rock that kept me from falling
Off the cliff to certain peril.
Cliff diving isn't the sport for me.
Keeping you in
My memories is
All I can offer you until our
Next meeting if it could only be as sweet.


Scheme A XXBCCC XXXBXCAX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 1010010 101001 010110110010 100110101000 110011011 010101011110 010111101111 1111101 01111110 10111010 110100111 1010 11001 1111010110 11011110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 513
Words 103
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 8
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 136
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

I wrote this an a tribute to a recently deceased dear friend of mine.

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Written on February 16, 2024

Submitted by chainzhunter on March 11, 2024

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