Analysis of Storm of grief



My tears falls heavier than the rain
And my wails are louder than thunder
Death comes wearing a human face
Precisely disguising as the one who brought forth
As the one who gave it what it's worth

It cradles the boy away leaving it's bed cold and empty
The dark clouds takes away the sun making it falter in It's axis
Letting cold and darkness dominate

The pangs of guilt, fear and regret punches me so hard in the gut
They fought so hard with their teeth bared but they lost


Scheme XXXXX XXX XX
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Metre 111100101 011110110 11100101 010010101111 101111111 110010110111010 01110101101100110 10101010 0111100110111001 11111111111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 476
Words 93
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 3, 2
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 127
Words per stanza (avg) 30

About this poem

It's about the feelings of profound grief. It also touches the theme of fear, guilt and regret

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Written on February 27, 2024

Submitted by blucewill on February 27, 2024

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