Analysis of Laws of attraction

D G S 1970 (Brooklyn)



The laws of attraction

We flounder on so much
Never getting enough information
Getting an abundance
information
we anger
apologize
then weep
Fearful for what we don't know
Lines drawn to what should be
Shifting to new places
What are we putting out
Keeps coming back in
Where's the light
In that hole that we fell into
The truth is
The pause
The stop
Forced upon us
Shows the present
The Now
For as long as possible
Realize how precious
This reflection is
So then
All of it
Can shine back on us


Scheme A XAXAXXXXXXXXXXBXXCXXXCBXXC
Poetic Form
Metre 011010 110111 101001010 101010 010 110 010 11 1011111 111111 101110 111101 11010 101 01111101 011 01 01 1011 1010 01 1111100 10110 10101 11 111 11111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 519
Words 117
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 26
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 200
Words per stanza (avg) 47

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Written during Covid

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Submitted by desmondsnyc4 on February 17, 2024

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