Analysis of Summer Breeze



our love was good
like a gentle summer breeze
and then it was taken away
with so much ease

until then the love I had read about
I only heard about in songs
until then the kind of love I had
except for once
didn’t last for long

got me wondering why
its so hard to see
when it’s the one thing that we have
that we both received for free

I hope one day to find out
but when that time comes rolling by
Someone will be missing me

when lives and loves are lost
no one says its fair
find a way to go thru life
and find a way to care


Scheme XAXA BXXXX CDXD BCD XEXE
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 10111 1010101 01111001 1111 0110111101 11010101 011011111 0111 1111 111001 11111 11011111 1110111 1111111 11111101 111101 110111 11111 1011111 010111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 535
Words 120
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 4, 3, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Written on December 17, 2023

Submitted by martinh.16048 on February 16, 2024

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