Analysis of My Sky
Lachlan Gear 2006 (logan)
Oh on this is the day,
i wish to ask you to stay;
I wish to see the beautiful you,
with a ring on and say "I do";
I wish to see you in a trousseau,
walking down the aisle with that lovely glow;
I wish to hear you say your vows,
then see me look at you with my heart ploughed;
I wish you were still here,
then i would have nothing to fear;
I wish that it was both of us,
at i atleast should have seen the bus;
I wish you weren't you so far away,
even in the night;
I wish i had the courage to meet you,
but my cowardice is stronger than i thought;
Goodbye
Scheme | AABBCDCEFGCCAHBIJ |
---|---|
Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111101 1111111 111101001 10110111 11111001 1010111101 11111111 1111111111 111011 11111011 11111111 11111101 1111011101 10001 1111010111 11100110111 1 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 554 |
Words | 137 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 17 |
Lines Amount | 17 |
Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 415 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 121 |
About this poem
This poem is about the one moment in life that was my happiest and worst day of my fictional life
Font size:
Citation
Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:
Style:MLAChicagoAPA
"My Sky" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 31 Oct. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/182428/my-sky>.
Discuss this Lachlan Gear poem analysis with the community:
Report Comment
We're doing our best to make sure our content is useful, accurate and safe.
If by any chance you spot an inappropriate comment while navigating through our website please use this form to let us know, and we'll take care of it shortly.
Attachment
You need to be logged in to favorite.
Log In