Analysis of My Sky

Lachlan Gear 2006 (logan)



Oh on this is the day,
i wish to ask you to stay;
I wish to see the beautiful you,
with a ring on and say "I do";
I wish to see you in a trousseau,
walking down the aisle with that lovely glow;
I wish to hear you say your vows,
then see me look at you with my heart ploughed;
I wish you were still here,
then i would have nothing to fear;
I wish that it was both of us,
at i atleast should have seen the bus;
I wish you weren't you so far away,
even in the night;
I wish i had the courage to meet you,
but my cowardice is stronger than i thought;
Goodbye


Scheme AABBCDCEFGCCAHBIJ
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 1111111 111101001 10110111 11111001 1010111101 11111111 1111111111 111011 11111011 11111111 11111101 1111011101 10001 1111010111 11100110111 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 554
Words 137
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 415
Words per stanza (avg) 121

About this poem

This poem is about the one moment in life that was my happiest and worst day of my fictional life

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Written on February 15, 2024

Submitted by lachie.gear06 on February 14, 2024

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