Analysis of Cold And Weak



I hate you
And the way you make me feel.
Cold and weak
As if I was a freak,
You make me feel stupid and dum
As if I came from the slums.
If telling the truth means facing you
I guess I'll lie
Until time passes by.
I'll put on a smile
Letting life fill in the tiles
What could I say
Not making you face the other way,
However that's not the truth
I love you more than words could say
Making me face the other way,
Your my other half
Making me want to live and laugh.
But that doesn't change the way you make me feel
Cold and weak
As if I was a freak


Scheme abCCdeaffghiijiikkbCC
Poetic Form
Metre 111 0011111 101 111101 11111001 1111101 110011101 1111 011101 11101 1011001 1111 110110101 101101 11111111 10110101 11101 10111101 11101011111 101 111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 553
Words 131
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 419
Words per stanza (avg) 119

About this poem

My Bestfriend who makes me feel like trash even though as if I wasn't enough of a catch.

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Written on February 11, 2024

Submitted by chestharaturi7 on February 10, 2024

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