Analysis of JUST THERE



I don't know when this moment will come again .....
The moment I felt today can't be weave in words
I felt him around me, everything, everywhere
It was a little painful to endure such mass energy but that feeling was addictive..
I wanted him more and more... ..
It was white snow with the daizy wilds
I saw a bright flash coming from front...
Like sun want to reach me
My legs were flattering
My hands were shivering just by his glimpse.. ( heavenly body)
My face was red as blood, as if my soul was blushing to see him in front.
I was all in him...
He spread his arms for my skin
I closed my eyes , and let him touch
But the moment he was just there to engulf me into him....
Someone prayed for my misery...
And the fan collapse from the ceiling ..
Just there


Scheme ABCDEFGHIHGJKLJHIC
Poetic Form
Metre 11111101101 010110111101 1110111010 11010101011110011101010 1101101 11111011 110111011 111111 110100 110100111110010 111111111111011101 11101 1111111 11110111 101011111011011 1111100 001011010 11
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 790
Words 166
Sentences 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 572
Words per stanza (avg) 151

About this poem

Poem is depiction of character who had romanticized her death. She is eager to leave the cruel world and embrace her body in the magical dimension of God. But the story begin with attempting suicide, which means suffering that led to end her life . She was happy, I was happy.....

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Written on October 11, 2023

Submitted by yashikaatri01 on February 06, 2024

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Yashika

I'm a fun loving girl, who sometimes face extreme anxiety and panic attacks . But am good and I love to write . I am a teenager with vast imagination that sometimes I question human existence. more…

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